假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了 5 公里越野赛跑活动。请…——2020 高考英语第 34 题答案解析

【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the
attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured
five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their
best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well
as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers
from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise,
but also made us more cohesive.
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。

【详解】体裁: 应用文
时态: 根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构: 总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth.
for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the
attention of every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them
necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the
directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but
also makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者
在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running
race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非
限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to
exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。
第二节(满分25分)