上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇…——2020 高考英语第 64 题答案解析

【答案】My Weekend
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last
weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by
the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones
that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet
juice went down my throat.
I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking,
but I could also feast on the sweetness!
【解析】
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文
，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety
of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过
去时。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如
Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last
weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in

color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking,
but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not
only…but… 和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清
晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。