Write an English composition…——2019 高考英语第 49 题答案解析

【答案】Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that you have developed a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea.
Personally speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share my
happiness of wearing my clothes. It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes. Then I may
naturally wish to know more about that particular “someone” and probably further deepen our relationship. In the
end, a good friendship between me and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes. What’s
more, if other students can try my clothes through the app. In turn, I also can try their new clothes. Therefore,
students can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money.
What’s more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them. In today’s material society, there
are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different occasions, such as a dress
for the party, gym suit for indoor sports. Moreover, the clothes can only realize their true value after they are put on
a person’s body.
To summarize, sharing my clothes on your app benefits others and me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信，时态应为一般
现在时。关键要点如下：①开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服；②表示祝贺；③自己的观点；④理
由；⑤总结。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：develop a new app（开发了一款软件），share
clothes（共享衣服），feel proud of（感到自豪），emotionally connect
someone（情感上连接某人），realize their true value（实现真正的价值）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
定语从句的使用To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share
my happiness of wearing my clothes.
名词性从句的使用What’s more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them.

非谓语动词的使用Hearing that you have developed a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of
your novel idea.