I have an (道歉) to make to you…——2011 高考英语第 70 题答案解析

【答案】apology

【解答】
apoplogy【解析】空前有不定冠词a，故用可数名词单数。
短文改错
make- making【解析】做后置定语，用非谓语动词，与所修饰词是主动关系，故用v-ing形式。
actor- actors【解析】actor是用One of修饰，用名词复数。
but- so/and【解析】根据句意可知前后文是因果活相加关系，连词用so或and。
get∧- it【解析】get是及物动词，后须跟宾语，指代camera，用it。
have- had【解析】根据时间状语可知此处时态是过去完成时，故have改为had。
everywhere-anywhere【解析】用语否定句中，意思是：任何地方，用anywhere。
disappointing- disapointed【解析】做表语，主语是人，故用过去分词。
walk out∧- of【解析】后有宾语a building，跟副词out后须跟介词of。
in the front of去掉the【解析】此处表示不在某范围内的前面，不用定冠词the。
had- have【解析】did已表示过去时态，故had改为have。
书面表达
【思路点拨】本题是一个开放性作文，试题要求考生回复一篇博客，而作文的体裁通过给出首句已经给出，
考生需要做的是先要读懂博文的意思，并且要明确试题的要求，有针对性的做出回复。文章主体时态是一
般现在时，主体人称应用第三人称。在书写时尤其要注意文章的内容要点，并且恰当地使用好过渡性词汇，
使行文的逻辑性和连贯性得以很好的体现，并适当的使用主从复合句等较复杂的结构和较高级的词汇，以
提高自己书面表达的档次。
【优秀范文】
One possible version:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to
do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,
development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples

around us. Some straight-A students in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were
expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.
Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have
more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
【亮点回放】范文结构准确，题材题材符合试题中的要求，内容要点齐全，尤其是先对于现象进行了由针
对性的分析，然后提出了行之有效的解决办法，并按照材料的要求提出了两点以上的建议，很好的完成了
试题的要求，并且使用了一些较高级的词汇和较复杂的结构，过渡性词汇的使用准确，行文连贯，由很强
的逻辑性。