【解答】
Directions:Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions
given below in Chinese.
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会,但王磊由于路远,交
通不便等原因犹豫不决,写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括:
(1)提出解决问题的方法;
(2)阐释音乐会的重要性。
【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
It's been a while since I heard from you.Last time,I invited you to attend the concert which
will be held next Friday in the century park.Though you did not reply to me,the hesitation
wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.Maybe it is the
recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind.However,
as far as I concerned,it's still worth our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious
symphony orchestras will perform many well﹣known compositions.It must be a feast for all the
audience.Moreover,chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it.You
should never miss such a fabulous concert !
In terms of difficulties you are worried about,I have already found some solutions.My father
will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene.I have managed to persuade him
to make his promise.In addition,in case of a rainy day,I have prepared two raincoats.I am
confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Though you did not reply to me,the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of
what was going on in your mind.
翻译:虽然你没有回答我,但你脸上的犹豫让我知道了你脑子里在想什么。
分析:句子里Though引导让步状语从句you did not reply to me;现在分词短语wearing on
your face作the hesitation的定语;what引导宾语从句was going on in your mind。
高分句型二
Moreover,chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it.
翻译:此外,我们可能会有一张有表演者签名的专辑。
分析:句子里,that引导表语从句we may have an album with performers autographs on it。
【解答】Dear Wang Lei,
It's been a while since I heard from you.Last time,I invited you to attend the concert which
will be held next Friday in the century park.Though you did not reply to me,the hesitation
wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind.【高分句型一】
Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your
mind.However,as far as I concerned,it's still worth our efforts.(写信目的)
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious
symphony orchestras will perform many well﹣known compositions.It must be a feast for all the
audience.Moreover,chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it.
【高分句型二】You should never miss such a fabulous concert !(阐释音乐会的重要性)
In terms of difficulties you are worried about,I have already found some solutions.My father
will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene.I have managed to persuade him
to make his promise.In addition,in case of a rainy day,I have prepared two raincoats.I am
confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.(提出解决问题的方法)
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】写作时,考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结
构,尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程,是一项将积
累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚,释放就越精彩;积累越科学,释放就越有效。