【答案】Dear Mr.A，
I am Li Hua，a student of Senior Three.Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity with the theme of revisiting the history ，I am writing to recommend "history play" as the main activity instead of visiting old soldiers or making short videos.
First of all ， it is a better way to know about the historical events vividly by maximum students engagement rather than printed text and photos.Through the involvement students could efficiently remember historical facts instead of merely reciting them from books or PPTs.Secondly， by appreciating the heroic plots in the stage ， students would comprehend the hard ﹣ won achievements of revolution deeply.In addition，students can further recognize the background， analyze the cause and evaluate the effect after the whole process of historical rehearsal.Most important of all，the excellent stories of national heroes and heroines will be imprinted in students mind and stimulate their national pride and confidence ， and even promote their devotion to a better future of our country.
I do hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity with the theme of revisiting the history ，I am writing to recommend "history play" as the main activity instead of visiting old soldiers or making short videos.
翻译：我知道我们学校正在就这次以走进历史为主题的活动征求意见，所以我写信推荐"表演历史剧"作为主要活动，而不是去看望老兵或制作短视频。
分析：句子里，现在分词 Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity with the theme of revisiting the history 作原因状语。
高分句型二
I do hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
翻译：我确实希望我的建议能得到考虑。
分析：句子里，助动词 do 强调谓语动词 hope；that 引导宾语从句 my suggestions will be taken into consideration。
【解答】Dear Mr.A，
I am Li Hua，a student of Senior Three.Knowing our school is soliciting advice about the activity with the theme of revisiting the history ，I am writing to recommend "history play" as the main activity instead of visiting old soldiers or making short videos.【高分句型一】（自己的选 择）
First of all ， it is a better way to know about the historical events vividly by maximum students engagement rather than printed text and photos.Through the involvement students could efficiently remember historical facts instead of merely reciting them from books or PPTs.Secondly， by appreciating the heroic plots in the stage ， students would comprehend the hard ﹣ won achievements of revolution deeply.In addition，students can further recognize the background， analyze the cause and evaluate the effect after the whole process of historical rehearsal.Most important of all，the excellent stories of national heroes and heroines will be imprinted in students mind and stimulate their national pride and confidence ， and even promote their devotion to a better future of our country.（理由）
I do hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration.【高分句型二】（表达希望）
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。